Friday, 12 September 2008

pReviEw

...I started thrusting unhurriedly until I noticed the look on her face. I heard her sniff. For all I cared she could cry herself a river. Like I told her I had crossed the point of no return. I changed our positions so as to gain more access then I hit a home run. I leaned over to ask what the matter was then she started with all the, 'I told you to stop' shit. Almost feeling bad, I wore my pyjamas, went to the living room and poured myself a drink...


64 comments:

NigerianDramaQueen said...

FIRSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

bumtight said...

NDQ go to bed!

bumtight said...

omg baroque, no u did not!

For all I cared she could cry herself a river. Like I told her I had crossed the point of no return

that was quite mean :( !

NigerianDramaQueen said...

Bumight na wa oh!free me jo
LOL

Baroque,
I'm hoping this is fiction oh. Cuz if a woman says STOP...

Shubby Doo said...
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Shubby Doo said...

1 question...did he love her? cos she was asking him 2... *singing*... stop in the name of love b4 u break my heart, think it over...guess he did both but way 2 l8

Shubby Doo said...

How mean...

There is never a point of no return...plus he had not lost himself 2 the moment cos he recognised the babe was sniffling 4 goodness sake...

What if something had been wrong with her & she collapsed...

People say stop cos they are hurting either physically or emotionally. He should have stopped & found out why.

Then 2 seek solace in a drink after... alone...haba...sounds like someone wrestling with the demons within...

Baroque...i hope this is not you...abeg no guy should do dis kain thing...na God i dey take beg all of una

Afrobabe said...

Ha....my darling baroque is out to revenge on all the ladies!!!

Afrobabe said...

and why did you go from red to green...with this last post you should have actually gone from green to red...

cos you are a danger to society now!!!

kmplx said...

shit!

LusciousRon said...

I am in total agreement with everyone. STOP means STOP thats why it is marked in red. I really hope you didn't do that.

miz-cynic said...

7th....was wondering wen u were gona put up a new post....iv read ur whole blog i think......and i second bumight....oh no u did not.!

Jarrai said...

This is fiction right?...it is isn't it?

Miss Definitely Maybe said...

hmmmmmmmm
am of two minds
granted a stop sign means stop
It does not mean go slow or rush past quickly
It means stop, put on your brake, switch off the engine, take your foot off the accelerator basically do whatever but STOP
however women need to be careful too where they place their STOP signs
a stop sign is always before advancing from a minor road to a major, cause you need to be cautious check for danger before u proceed but once you hit the freeway/motorway ..........there is a reason why the state department is yet to install stop signs on freeways, simple reason being at the speed cars are most likely to be travelling either they will not be seen early enough or simply ignored. (enough said)

ablackjamesbond said...

If this is the preview, then I guess there should be an unveiling or a premiere...will wait for that before i make my comments

bArOquE said...

@black007, apparently the only one that overstands the word, 'PREVIEW'

@NDQ&Bumight, una no dey sleep?

@bumight, no i did not

@NDQ, you were saying...if a woman says STOP...eheh?

@shubbydoo, what’s love got to do wiv it? yea, he sure heard her sniff...if anything was wrong she should’ve said ages b4, & if she was gonna hurt, at this time, she was gonna have to hurt.

@afrobabe, revenge ke? when I have you? LOL...don’t u just love the green? Its lush!...kisses

@kmplx, yea...SHIT!!!

@lusciousron, yea STOP means STOP…please read MISS DEFINITELY MAYBE’s comment above

@miz-cynic, no sweetie, I did not...you’re welcome here anytime...feel at home

@jarrai, is it? CHAI!!!

@missdefinitelymaybe , you’re the correctest babe, 3 gbozaz for you...PLEASE EVERYONE READ PART B HERE!!!

@black007, even with all the precautions she took? he still f**ked her! LOL

Free-flowing Florida said...

sweatheart, wot u just described above has a name & it's called RAPE!

Ms Sula said...

Are you writing the Making of a Rapist?

That's what this sounds like to me.

Esmeralda said...

OUCH!

u've just put urself up to be flayed with this o baroque!

at least u are no longer bleeding all over the place! and yea, green is lush, green means go, green means fertile, emeralds *winks* and ish.

hope u apologized!

ibiluv said...

i want the full gist before i comment.........

Tyger said...

no comments!

waiting to see where this is going as it is a preview...

i will not like people tend to do assume this is your a page from your diary.... so i will wait and see it through

bArOquE said...

@FFF, my love, would that be from a legal or your emotional point of view?

@ms sula, ...The Makings Of A Rapist...sounds nice, but wont work...nice name though *considers writing along those lines later*

@esmeraldaz sugaz, you know, the flaying is not easy oh...glad u love the green...i knew you would...i dont know about apologiez but lets see

@ibiluv, patience is a virtue & you shall reap its fruit...kisses

@tyger, my dear, i would have been shocked if you too showed an excessively critical point of view

theicequeen said...

sumn must be truly wrong with me o! i have been meaning to waka and come to your blog for the longest time, i don't know what has been stopping me..i'm ever so glad i came here today though..you write amazingly! and this preview..hmmm..very ahem o! hurry up and put up the whole thing..anticipation wants to kill me here!

once again..me is lurvin your blog! *immediately blogrolls

Rita said...

Just tripped by the fact that your favourite book is "Not Even God Is Ripe Enough..."...one of my favourites as well...

tell me u're nicer than "For all I cared she could cry herself a river..."

naijalines said...

Hmmmm....
Is there a way to turn this around? I'd be glad to find out.

Red Sapphire said...

aaawwwhh...u nasty man...i am guessing u were just bout done with only 5 thrusts at the most....doing that to d girl....

Naapali said...

I remember this line from Jaja "often times these days, reality assumes a ridiculous hyperbole that defies parody. Perfectly baroque in its excess."

- and I wonder if fiction may do the same?

Shubby Doo said...
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Shubby Doo said...

@baroque - Just like Rubens, I’m here to show ‘adoration’ cos that your comment @ mine made me laugh …& it kinda scared me a little sha …

@Miss DM – don’t agree with u at all… granted there are no stop signs on the motorway but they have these automated warnings these days to reduce congestion and moderate driver speeds at black ‘incident’ spots…after which all you need to do is keep an eye on the car in front…if its brake lights come on…you brake… if it stops…you stop…a little awareness of other road users (thrown in with the fact that you have been told you cannot go about your business as usual at that particular time) should prevent you from hurting others and yourself… that is your sign

@baroque – this preview was hard hitting… then you say ‘she was gonna have to hurt’… so it was deliberate?… hmmm… submit the rest sweetie & lets see but ‘he’ makes me uncomfortable…

Jarrai said...

Mr man where is the rest of the gist? And you haven't answered me question...hmmm.

geisha.song. said...

OOH the anticipation!

Red Sapphire said...

unorthodox decorum, as nasty as u sound.i still kinda like the way u put it out there.so for ur honesty...i have personally singled u out for an award...
Follow the link...
http://wwwredsapphire.blogspot.com.
Enjoy!!!!

Original Mgbeke said...

Baroque!!! This is how rape accusations start o! She said STOP, so you should have STOPPED!

Original Mgbeke said...

Oh and I've missed you by the way.

bArOquE said...

@icequeen, very ahem abi? please dont let anticipation kill you...thanks for the love baby

@rita, i'm a lot nicer than that, believe me...how are you?

@naijalines, it depends on what you want to turn around

@redsapphire, dont worry, it was way more than 5thrusts...take it from me

@drnaaps, you know, after Jaja wrot that, i've been wonderiong the same thing

@shubbydoo...RELAX...it is coming to a blog near you...you don buy ticket?

@jarrai, the rest of the jist is brewing...

@geisha, i feel you...

@redsapphire, thanks for the singleing out...as nasty as i sound

@originalmgeks, yeah she said stop, so?...btw, i miss you too

Emilia said...

cozy place you have here. something tells me I will be back for sure
like it

guerreiranigeriana said...

...preview huh?...i'm curious about what...

...point of no return?...do you usually have strength and sense of mind to switch positions at that point?...

Rayo said...

Hopefully the featured presentation will be released soon.

(¯`·._.·[***Fresh&Fab***]·._.·´¯) said...

oooh, i like it, interesting, oya finish it

bArOquE said...

@emilia, thanks alot...but something tells me you wont be back...prove me wrong

@gnaija, yes oh, point of no return...& of course, there's the stenght and sense of mind to change positions

@Rayo, hopefully it will...just need to settle first

@fresh&fab, soon my dear...soon

Smaragd said...

update s'il te plait!

Vera Ezimora said...

Oga Baroque,

We don see preview. Oya knack us the full tory abeg.

dat one okrika girl...xyz said...

Damn has it been that long? when did your background stop bleeding? I like the green sha, reminds me of money.


As for your preview *hisssss*

Chari said...

wow...

*jaw drops to the floor*

no comment!

bArOquE said...

@smargd, soon oh, no vex
PS: abeg change those lips u put there

@madame vera, the tory sef no sweet me again as i dey review am so, the preview don sweet pass, me i tire...

@dat1okbabe, as you don shun me naa...meanwhile, na me u dey hiss for? make eczema fire your nyash...

@chari, abeg pick your jaw!

Buttercup said...

Ok, im also waitin for the premiere...but dang, shudnt u have updated by now? U certainly know how to build up anticipation..

Buttercup said...

1st time here btw!(me thinks)

ShonaVixen said...

first time here...and hey where's the whole story??time to update me thinks!!

desperate lady said...

Wurrisdis? Its been 20days n no full jist..........but anyway...
Y didn't u stop wen she told u too? K let me keep ma wrds until I read d full jist b4 u attack me like d other time.
But errrrrrrrrrr, if she didn't want it n u forced her, ur sooooo wrong......*dnt attack me pls*

Just...Toluwa said...

furst tym here...me likey! update...no?

flabby said...

lol..girls are funny (we really are)..we want to walk straight to the very edge of a cliff and then turn back..but sometimes if ur holding someone's hand..they jump and u go down with them!!

LOL..WTF??? i have no idea wat i just went on about!

Buttercup said...

i think im gonna be comin here everyday till u update..when u get tired of seein these pink lips kissin a lollipop, u'd have no choice but to update!

LOL..

bArOquE said...

@buttercup, it not about building too much anticipation, the story is not just ready...truth is, i'm not feeling it anymore...you're welcom here anytime

@shonevixen, the story is in the pipeline, the container hasnt landed

@desperatelady...kisses...LOL

@toluwa, update? yes! any luck with the naija husband?

@flabby, true talk oh

@buttercup (LABEL) everyday...lips..kissing...lips...lollipop...pink lips...no choice...coming...arrghghhh...LOL

Buttercup said...

Hmmm what can i say..i'v got a way with words.. ;)

LOL..

Queen of My Castle said...

Na wa Oh!

What's this I see you sending Afrobabe kisses?! I leave for 2 weeks and your lips are on another?! LOL J/K

Oddly enough this scenario happens more than we care to admit to. *Sigh*

AnyaPosh said...

hmm...

so where is the end of this? abi the beginning? I need to know what happened before & after. Is that asking too much :)

Pink-satin said...

RAPE!!

Tigeress said...

Are u confessing to rape?

Ms. Catwalq said...

Uhhhhhh, you said to Mgbeke, "she said stop, so?"
No, you didn't......

bArOquE said...

~why am i so sure that you Catty wont say stop in the middle of sex unless to change positions?...common!

Ms. Catwalq said...

Baroque: WHEN A WOMAN STAYS STOP, YOU REMOVE YOURSELF FROM HER PRESENCE...IF I WANT TO CHANGE POSITIONS, I WILL TELL YOU, "BAROQUE (OR WHO EVER I AM FUCKING), I WANT IT THIS WAY"...IF I SAY STOP, IT MEANS STOP OR HAND ME YOUR DICK COS IF YOU CONTINUE, I ASSUME YOU NEED ME TO DEFEND MYSELF BY DIVESTING YOU OF YOUR MEMBER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

miz-cynic said...

u should have stoped baroque.....rily...it wouldnt have cost u so much since u werent feeling her anyways....but then again ...u wouldnt have done tht to someone ur feeling but tht punishment is too much

bArOquE said...

just maybe, i might need to tell the whole story to put an end to this conclusion that abound from a lack of knowledge

miz-cynic said...

im waiting for this story o.